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Abyssian

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Light through colored feathers.

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See also: [Macro Universe]

Edits made in Adobe Photoshop CS4 and Adobe Lightroom II.



Canon Rebel XTi/400D
60mm Macro Lens
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Image size
600x900px 405.61 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XTi
Shutter Speed
1/60 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
60 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jan 12, 2010, 5:48:15 PM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I'm always up for giving a requested critique. They're helpful and all of us can learn from them. So, here we go:

Vision: Knowing that this particular piece is part of a similar series is helpful, even though on it's own it's a visually appealing and interesting piece. Despite it's abstract nature, it is still apparent that you knew what you were going for

Originality: There's a lot of color in the world, and I must say you have quite a tribute to it here! The colors are slightly predictable, but the texture at closer looks add to it's originality.

Technique: There are some blurred spots that look like they shouldn't be there, but other than that, there's balance, interest, and it leads my eye all around quite fluidly. Macros are difficult, and I would just recommend taking a bit more care against those blurred areas that don't look intentional.

Impact: Very good with impact, it would be hard to see this and not need a second look! The colors are vibrant and the lines are appealing. Good work all around!